Clear stance on the stimulus; scope is appropriate for the time limit.
Sample HAST written expression marking report with ACER-style criteria, quote-anchored feedback, and teacher sign-off — for tutors and selective prep.
Draft marks with manuscript evidence — export after teacher approval.
Rubric total
14 / 20 · 70%
Marker summary
Position is clear and vocabulary is strong. Lift argument development — move from description to sustained persuasion with a rebuttal paragraph before the conclusion.
Clear stance on the stimulus; scope is appropriate for the time limit.
Reasons are listed but not fully developed; counter-view mentioned once only.
Quote-anchored deduction: −2 · Counter-argument not developed.
Manuscript quote“Some people think the opposite, but I disagree.”Mid-body · no rebuttal
Paragraphing supports reader flow; conclusion restates position.
Strong word choice; two run-on sentences and one vague phrase.
Quote-anchored deduction: −2 · Run-on sentence reduces clarity.
Manuscript quote“The policy is good it helps everyone learn better.”Paragraph 2