Thesis is explicit and mostly sustained. Paragraph 3 drifts from the central claim.
Quote-anchored deduction: −2 · Body paragraph does not support the main thesis.
Manuscript quote“However, many people still disagree about this issue.”Paragraph 3
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Total score
31 / 40 · 78%
Summary feedback
A clear argument with solid structure. Strengthen evidence integration with sourced quotes and tighten the conclusion so it restates the thesis without new ideas.
Thesis is explicit and mostly sustained. Paragraph 3 drifts from the central claim.
Quote-anchored deduction: −2 · Body paragraph does not support the main thesis.
Manuscript quote“However, many people still disagree about this issue.”Paragraph 3
Uses one strong statistic but analysis of how it supports the claim is thin.
Quote-anchored deduction: −3 · Limited explanation of how evidence supports the claim.
Manuscript quote“Recycling rates have improved in many cities across the country.”Page 2 · no source cited
Introduction, body, and conclusion are well signposted with effective transitions.
Generally fluent formal tone; several comma splices reduce clarity.
Quote-anchored deduction: −3 · Repeated comma splices.
Manuscript quote“Phones are useful, they help students research, this is important.”Paragraph 4