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HAST written expression feedback example — selective writing report

HAST · Written Expression · Fictional HAST-style persuasive task · learner practice report

Sample HAST written expression practice report with ACER-style criteria and quote-anchored feedback for selective preparation.

Marks include manuscript evidence so each deduction can be checked.

Written Expression — Student B (anonymized demo)

HAST WRITTEN EXPRESSION · DRAFT · Junior Secondary · March practice mock

Rubric total

14 / 20 · 70%

Marker summary

Position is clear and vocabulary is strong. Lift argument development — move from description to sustained persuasion with a rebuttal paragraph before the conclusion.

Strengths

Quote-verified strengths for learner and parent review.

Criterion-level feedback

4 / 5 Argument & position

Clear stance on the stimulus; scope is appropriate for the time limit.

3 / 5 Development & evidence

Reasons are listed but not fully developed; counter-view mentioned once only.

Quote-anchored deduction: −2 · Counter-argument not developed.

Manuscript quote“Some people think the opposite, but I disagree.”Mid-body · no rebuttal
4 / 5 Structure & cohesion

Paragraphing supports reader flow; conclusion restates position.

3 / 5 Language & mechanics

Strong word choice; two run-on sentences and one vague phrase.

Quote-anchored deduction: −2 · Run-on sentence reduces clarity.

Manuscript quote“The policy is good it helps everyone learn better.”Paragraph 2